April #8 Redacted

This would work better with punctuation.

The grieving look behind.
The path in front
passed by without attention.
Put blackberries and red ripe strawberries
to the memory, and start back
along the path home.

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2 thoughts on “April #8 Redacted”

    1. The words, “put blackberries and red ripe strawberries to the memory” is powerful and evocative. I lso admire how you’ve handled the relation of your poem to the source text, keeping the essential meaning in so few words.

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